What is the plan for TDMSKP? Are we aiming for detail or brevity? The existing entries definitely lean towards detail. I guess "detailed but concise" is the best way to go...
Agreed, I think... It is indeed hard to strike a balance; 'concise' is the key word - please, no essays!

I would prefer brevity where possible but obviously some detail is very useful - particularly re entry/exit routes and outstanding or unique features - but I don't want to be told exactly what to do and see every step of the way.
I certainly am worried about being told what to expect in the way of anchor points - logs, slings, bolts, fixed ropes, chains, etc. - which can be very changeable features.
At least, for TDMSKP, there is the obvious advantage that its entries can be edited by
anyone. If a canyon's features or conditions change, TDSKP's guidebook entry can change. The problem with a printed book like RJ's is that the more detail that's included, the more chance of some form of inadvertent misinformation, as time goes by. And then, a long wait to a reprint.

Timmy